MST Time: Castlevaina The Belmont Legacy part 7Seven years have past, since the death of Aurora Belmont. Now there was something new to talk about the town.MST Time: Castlevaina The Belmont Legacy part 7 by ~Fofa
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People were beginning to talk just as three people walked in; two were young children more than likely seven years of age. The adult with them was unknown for he or she was wearing a cloak to cover itself.
It totally isn’t the sue.
One was a boy, the other was a girl. The boy had long white hair that went to his upper arms, which went perfectly with his lavender eyes. His hair was parted on the right side. He wore a green trench coat, with a slit down the middle in the back. A black shirt, white p
MST Time: Castlevaina The Belmont Legacy part 6Everyone followed Alucard; they ran smack dab into a large castle. "This is where she's been, in this castle." Nathan got ready his whip, Alucard his sword, Uriel, Hugh, and Darien also with swords, lastly Daira with her magic and staff. The drawbridge and the gates opened for them. "This is too creep" Daria whispered.MST Time: Castlevaina The Belmont Legacy part 6 by ~Fofa
Too creep? You mean creepy, right?
"This is not time to be scared, Daira." Alucard said in a calm voice. They ran into the castle not knowing what dangers laid ahead. They ran into many vile creatures, as they entered.
Like skeletons? Zombies? Bats? Meyerpires?
The Priest laughed "Look at this Ciardha, your 'friends' a
MST Time: Castlevania The Belmont Legacy part 5Alucard and Nathan walked into the door, and Richter was sitting in his chair. "Hey Adrian." Richter greeted.MST Time: Castlevania The Belmont Legacy part 5 by ~Fofa
I don’t think that Richter would call Alucard by his name, even if did know what it was.
But Alucard's stern look gave Maria quite a scare somehow she knew it was about Aurora. Maria started to cry and ran to Alucard. "Alucard! It's Aurora isn't it?" Nathan was shocked "What? He's Alucard?!" Alucard looked at Nathan "Yes, I am Alucard. The Son of Count Dracula." Richter stood and let Nathan sit down. "The boy, found out huh?"
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Alucard nodded "He found out, and someone has Aurora." Alucard cla
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